Hey not bad,
Only gave you a six here, but voted hire to give you a bit of my awesome 1.9x vote protection! a few problems, i SWEAR the building needs to be checked out, and that kiss was so passionate, the girls torso imploded! and is it me? or at the end i think i may have been getting dislexia.... those problems are always easy to fix, but can be missed easily too... so my suggestions for you? start slow, dont really submit things till your comfortable, work on your art and tweening, and enjoy it!
id ask you to check out my stuff, but oh, wait, it got blammed lol. (it WAS a spoof film, so i DID expect it.)
Regards n shit, swap.